Brief 1 Crit and Development

Brief 1 Crit and Development

After a final crit on my J-card, poster and object I have been given a clear idea of how I want my final products to look. My J-card received mainly a lot of positive feedback. The only thing I had to change was the type and the amount of patterns used. I was to include more patterns from the bank note to travel across the majority of the card. To reveal the image and type I would mimic some of the type already on the note by creating a bald clear outline around them. The track list would now sit on the empty panels with this empty space effect around it. This relates back to a simple punk aesthetic where they would use scanners in most of their work and show to cut and paste marks around image and type. For the colour I would then have the patterns in either red or blue when printing and the image and type the opposite to that. This includes a decent amount of design on all panels and stops me from reserving myself which was mentioned in a crit. 

For the flag I was to use the object that I soon create as a base for its design. The object would be an origami rhino made from one of my Brazilian bank notes. For the flag, I'd scan the head in revealing a mixed and matched variety of patterns colliding. I'd also use the colours from the Sao Paulo flag again as this would be the base of all my design. I'd expand the head to a large scale so show every detail and this could almost me the symbol or logo that represents my genre. This was inspired by my previous bank note collage but this has way more form, body and structure. All I have to do now is decide  on the type of material I should print all my products onto.