OUGD505 FINAL CRIT

During my final crit I presented my flushlush bath bomb guide mock up and explained all of the ideas behind this updated idea. The feedback was mainly positive and I was told that I had considered the design of the guide very well however, I was told that perhaps I was investing too much time into the production of this and had to ask myself important questions such as where will this be found and if I've moved too far away from my original topic.

This could be rectified very easily by considering what was missing from this guide for instance, how it would exist in the world and how people would receive this document. After some discussion one of things that I think I will go through with for the succession of the campaign is to include a pack of all the ingredients to make the bath bomb to be handed out with the flyer, meaning that the printed matter is not entirely pointless given the fact that this information could be found online if needed. Having these two items married together will be a great way to begin the campaign and the rest will be generated by the people who receive these which will be a social media presence of bath bombs being flushed.

To recall back to my initial point of being supportive of the police, the flip side of my guide will feature a list of police charities that could also be donated to in support of them, some more context to why exactly this is being done and some other facts and figures I have previously sourced to maintain the point to support the police.